Sunday, 22 May 2011

Shared writing with room 1 - 'The Day of the Wind."

On Friday 20th of May rooms 1 and 2 did some shared writing about the windy day we had earlier in the week.  Before we wrote we listened to the story by Joy Cowley, 'Day of the Wind.'
We saw three big piles of leaves like a tornado in the wind.  "Ha haa," went the wind.  "Hoo hoo," went the wind and out we went.  By Ben and Damien.

On the windy day we see leaves and wind and some ladybirds.  We had a leaf fight.
Adriena, Celeste and Alice.



In room 2 one of the children opened the window then in surprise the children flew out the window.  "Weeeeee," cried the children, "We are flying."
By Pearl and Indy


The Great Stories.
Room 1 and room 2 made great stories.  The windows were open so the great stories danced out of the classroom.  The trees blew the stories around the school.
By Zarrrie and Scarlett.


On the day of the wind we made stories and they came alive.  A person from the rugby ate a 20 metre hotdog.  By Kase and Lucus.

On the day of the wind there was a tornado swooping up all the leaves up into the pile.  I was blocking the leaves and we all had a leaf fight.  It was an awesome day and we played.
Corey, Kahn and Manu

"Hoo- hoo," howled the wind.  The wind rushed like a tornado into rooms 1 and 2.  Cloe and Angelica stretched their arms out like fairies and they flew out the door around the playground and back inside.  "Ha - haa! That was fun." they said.
By Cloe and Angelica.

On the day of the wind we played in the leaves.  We really wanted to go to the snow.  The wind says... "Ooo-ooo, and Aaa-aaa."  The wind blows us into the sky.  We fly like birds.
Hui Qi and Marni.


Johnny jumped into the wind.  We flew into the town.  The leaves swirled all around us. 
 By Johnny and Eddie. 


The wind was so strong that the children from Lower Moutere School opened the windows.  The wind blew the children around the playground and back again.
Jiawei and DJ .

On the day of the wind we played in the autumn leaves.  The leaves flew up into the air and made a tornado.  We had leaf fights.
By Judah and Jayden.

On the day of the wind I put out my arms and rose up into the sky.  My Mum shouted, "How did you do that?" I said, "I don't know!"
By Kiva
Dominic from room 1 had just got back from Australia and really wanted to write about his trip...
I went to Australia.  I saw lots of kangaroos.  I saw lots of koalas.
By Dominic.